Slowness....

SOTD - Vincent by Don McLean

Ay, finishing is muy slow. >_< I need to quit procrastinating and get my butt back on that script.

Until I come up with a better synopsys, here's a summary of my script to keep my (future and possibly present) readers satisfied:

Shy, introverted Alethea Coleman is a college student at Excalibur University. Due to her shyness and her looks, she has no friends, and wishes only for a life free of loneliness. As she is laying down to sleep one night, she is literally "spirited away"- her spirit is removed from her body in astral-projection and transported to another world. After escaping her kidnappers with the help of five other hostages (Raven Strong, Bridgett Addison, Melissa Fox, Hilary Asado, and Brianna Marie), she and her companions are taken in by the queen of the kingdom and told of their reason for being there: they are the six Elemental Priestesses destined to collect their Elemental Crystals and save this world from danger. They must now fight for the kingdom and learn to work together- and trust each other.

Yep, so that's it. How do you guys like it? Is there anything I need to change (generic story, etc.)? Is the concept good enough that you'd read it as a manga or go see it as a movie? I need opinions here! WAKE UP PEOPLE!!! (lol Pepsi reference)